The Obsidian Cage
I asked Quen 3 to write me an erotic story about 2 Vampires who like having sex in their BDSM dungeon.
It wasn’t happy and decided the theme was a little too graphic for it and suggested instead I keep the main theme and explore the concepts of Dominance and Submission in a politically correct way e.g “Kaelen raised a hand, palm open, a gesture that conveyed both dominance and a profound sense of inevitability.”
I need to seek out some more uncensored models to see what I can get out of them.
The air in the Bleeding Hearth Dungeon hung thick with the scent of iron, ozone, and something else… something ancient and subtly sweet, like decaying roses and crushed velvet. Rain hammered against the reinforced glass ceiling, a relentless rhythm mirroring the low hum of the machinery – generators that pulsed with stolen energy, keeping the darkness at bay. Here, within this subterranean tomb dedicated to forbidden pleasures, lived Lyra, a vampire whose skin was the color of bruised plums and whose eyes held the chilling depth of a glacial lake. Across from her, Kaelen was an Xylosian, his iridescent scales shifting with an unsettling grace, his form sculpted by centuries of calculated dominance.

They’d been drawn together – inexplicably, disastrously – through the dungeon’s ancient rituals. A shared hunger for something beyond their respective worlds, a desperate need to feel something other than the sterile repetition of servitude. The initial encounters were fraught with tension. The silence stretched, punctuated by the rasping hiss of the ventilation system – a mechanical whisper that seemed to amplify the oppressive stillness – and the rhythmic clink of Kaelen’s boots on the polished stone floor.
Lyra’s touch – precise, deliberate, and laced with a chilling coldness – was a constant reminder of her control. She’d use it sparingly, to test Kaelen’s boundaries, to observe his reactions. He’d anticipate her power, recognizing the subtle shifts in her posture, the barely perceptible tightening of her jaw – a language he’d learned to interpret through years of observation. His movements were inherently calculated, each action a carefully rehearsed performance designed to elicit submission.
The dungeon was littered with devices – archaic neural inhibitors designed to suppress emotions, sonic resonators calibrated for precise pleasure, and vials filled with viscous, pulsating fluids. Each object served as a testament to the ancient, brutal practices that kept them tethered to their captivity. Lyra’s touch could induce a deep, almost hypnotic paralysis, while Kaelen’s controlled pulses generated exquisite sensations – a rush of warmth, a sharpening of senses, a terrifying surrender to his own desires.
A sudden scrape from the far corner of the room – a sound that echoed with unsettling finality – shattered the stillness. Kaelen’s crimson eyes narrowed, focusing on a section of the wall where a meticulously crafted mosaic depicting a stylized serpent coiled around a dagger was partially obscured by shadows. The air thickened with a subtle scent – ozone mixed with something metallic and vaguely floral, like crushed blood orchids.
“You are… surprisingly compliant,” Lyra murmured, her voice a silken rasp as she traced patterns on his scaled arm. “Your resistance is… elegant.” She extended a finger, allowing him to feel the coldness of it – a stark contrast to his own internal temperature. The silence between them was thick with unspoken tension, punctuated by the relentless drip of water from the ceiling – each drop echoing like a tiny hammer blow against the stillness – and the low thump of Kaelen’s internal chronometer – a pulse that seemed to synchronize with his own, a constant reminder of his dominion.
“The Veridian Order,” he replied, his voice low and resonant, a cadence honed by centuries of devout observance – “proclaims the power of balance and harmony. They strive for stillness, for the cessation of all change.” He gestured towards a massive obsidian altar carved with intricate depictions of sun-drenched landscapes. “It’s a mockery of the true source of all light – the Eternal Void.”
Lyra’s response was a chilling stillness. “Your devotion to your belief system is… intriguing,” she murmured, her voice devoid of emotion. “A testament to the enduring strength of conviction.” She extended a finger, allowing him to feel the coldness of it – a stark contrast to his own internal temperature. “You possess an unsettling ability to shape the shadows themselves.”
Kaelen raised a hand, palm open, a gesture that conveyed both dominance and a profound sense of inevitability. “We are bound by our beliefs,” he stated, his voice laced with a dangerous intensity. “Our paths are destined to diverge. Your rituals… they merely amplify the echoes of my own.” He allowed Lyra to extend a single, precise finger – a gesture that sent a wave of cold dread through her veins.
“The convergence points are shifting,” she stated, her voice devoid of emotion. “Our energies… are becoming intertwined.” A subtle tremor ran through the floor beneath their feet – a vibration that resonated with an unsettling familiarity – hinting at a deeper, more ancient force at play. It was a resonance both terrifying and strangely alluring – a shared acknowledgement of a destiny far greater than either of them could comprehend.
“Your devotion to your belief system is… intriguing,” she said again, her voice devoid of emotion. “A testament to the enduring strength of conviction.” She extended a finger, allowing him to feel the coldness of it – a stark contrast to his own internal temperature. “And your understanding of shadows… it’s remarkable.”
As Lyra’s fingers brushed against his, the obsidian altar pulsed with a faint, violet light – a signal of escalating energy, mirroring the growing darkness within their shared consciousness. The sound of the rain intensified, a relentless drumming that seemed to amplify the unspoken tension – a symphony of opposing faiths, converging in a space where power and darkness intertwined, threatening to consume them all.”